THE Clique 2.0

lol no why would i

jenni/evelina/etc do you play the sims social because you should so i can ask you for brain puzzles and paint brushes and play songs for you

LOL i'm such a geek that i actually created other accounts to play sims social and cityville on because even though i am one, i don't really want other people to know just how much of a geek i am

but i'll add you on all of them, so you'll have like five new neighbors, now doesn't that sound good

oh so you are like rory boardie and such
i was like what the fuck

haha yeah that's me

i have two more but i guess i forgot to add you on those accoutns

wow, i can't believe my mother right now

she's actually trying to stop dad from going out to play dart
which he's really good at
well he was, when i was little, but when my sister was born he didn't have the time to keep playing anymore but he was like 15th in all of sweden

i... just wow
what is she doing, i don't understand, is she the only one of the two that gets to have hobbies?
i mean she has her choir and her aerobics twice a week AND she doesn't have a drivers license, nor does she know how to drive, so he has to drive her everywhere

and now she says WHAT

what a poophead

also i will get those plans to you as soon as i harvest enough

okay so i'm supposed to turn this in for english class, could you take a look at it?

Quote :

I'd known about him for quite a while, I saw him play the game and I saw his love and passion for it. I saw his blue eyes as they were filled with sadness and despair just shortly after the incident and I saw them light up at the mention of his family. I saw the look of sheer determination like it had been permanently etched into his face as he struggled through the hardships of getting his life back to normal, and I saw the way he handled himself when they told him he would never again be able to do what he was most passionate about; with poise and grace.
These are the things I've seen from afar. I've known about him, but I only just met him yesterday and even then, I never properly met him/I didn't properly meet him.

I honestly don't think I'll ever meet him in person, but I'd very much like to, so that I could tell him what an inspiration he's been to me. I want to tell him how much he means, not only to me, but to everyone else who has been made aware of his situation. I want him to know how appreciative we all are of everything he's done for us, to know that we all feel for and with him, and know that he will always be missed and that our memories of him will always be cherished.
We're all a big family, and no matter what has happened or will happen to him, he'll always be a part of that family and we're proud to have him.

Most of all, I want to be able to tell him what an incredible person he is and that he deserves the world, when in reality, he deserves so much more.

it's supposed to be a "description of a person whom I would like to meet again"

there might be a lot of mistakes in that last paragraph because by now i'm just writing to get it done and i'm not really paying attention to what i'm doing

Lol alright! No problem. It's really well written I think but like, there are some minor grammatical mistakes that most people would make. In my grade, HERE! So I don't know if your teacher would even notice but I'll fix it up for you to the best of my ability. If you don't like some of my mistakes then just tell me....but I probably fixed it because I HAD to lol.

Here's the edited version:

I'd known about him for quite a while--I had always seen him play the game, filled with his love and passion for it. I saw his blue eyes as they filled with sadness and despair just shortly after the incident, and later I saw them light up at the mention of his family. I saw the look of sheer determination as though it had been permanently etched into his face as he struggled through the hardships of getting his life back to normal. But most of all, I saw the way he handled himself when they told him he would never again be able to do what he was most passionate about; he still composed himself with poise and grace.

These are only the things I've seen from afar. I finally had the privelege of meeting him yesterday, but even now I still haven't properly met him.

I honestly don't think I'll ever meet him in person, (??????? I THOUGHT YOU JUST MET HIM YESTERDAY LOL) but I'd very much like to, so that I could tell him what an inspiration he's been to me. I want to tell him how much he means, not only to me, but to everyone else who has been made aware of his situation. I want him to know how appreciative we all are of everything he's done for us, to know that we all feel for and with him, and to know that he will always be missed and that our memories of him will always be cherished.

We're all a big family, and no matter what has happened or will happen to him; he'll always be a part of that family because we're proud to have him.

Most of all, I want to be able to tell him what an incredible person he is. I at least want him to know that he deserves the world, when in reality, he deserves so much more.

I'll have to change the tenses somewhere, because you had that you just met him yesterday in the second paragraph. But in the third paragraph you said you don't think you'l ever meet him in person. LMFAO.

LOL I meant to clarify that earlier but I must've forgotten to before I posted this

um well i guess, i've been in the same room as him, i've been like 10 feet away from him, but i haven't MET him like shook his hand or anything

not sure how to work that into my text lol what am i doing

Heres what I would say:

These are only the things I've seen from afar. I finally had the privelege of being in the same room as him yesterday, but even now I still haven't properly met him.

I honestly don't think I'll ever personally meet him, but I'd very much like to.

but that sounds so weird since it's supposed to be a description of a person i would like to meet again

how about

These are only the things I've seen from afar. I finally had the privelege to meet him today, but much to my dismay, not in person.

lol well that was horrible

uhm

i'm supposed to hand it in on monday, but it'll be okay right? especially after the changes you made jenni

dannie if you see this and you feel like you've got it in you to read it i'd love your input as well

I FEEL SO SHIT

FUCK FUCK FUCK

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WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS

ugh

really

ugh

die

well i
think it is good
except what's in the red should only be the first one

oh and evelina if you see a notification that my sim wants to date your sim that is because i am hoarding loves please ignore it

lol okay then

and that was what the red was for, i didn't know which one to choose so i marked it in red so that i wouldn't forget about it

and i did go with the first one i think

http://www.ny1.com/content/news_beats/education/147027/ny1-exclusive--at-swedish-inspired-school--it-s-all-up-to-the-kids

LOOK THIS IS THE KIND OF SCHOOL I USED TO ATTEND

oh i thought you said that was the school you used to attend and i was like what evelina when did you live in new york!!!!